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Destined to be
There comes a time
to see, feel and hear
when the big picture
becomes so very clear
it overwhelms in waves
a reflection so intense
permeates your body
inflames every sense
and the journey taken
with many a detour
often so arduous
always so obscure
furrowed your brow
ultimately leading to
the here and now
the space, the time
the people you see
is the exact moment
you were destined to be
feedback van andere lezers- ppe
lovely!
killea: thank you, ppe
xx
j - yellow
thank you for this amazing poem,
it mean much to me
M.
xx
killea: Glad to hear it, Marc
xx
j - ivo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WB6jhbtDUZE
heel mooi eerlijk gedicht ... luister maar waar ik aan dacht toe ik dit las ..
killea: beautiful song, so poignant
xx
j - miepe
waarom wil ik je gedichten altijd harop proclameren?
ik blijf ze altijd zo uitdagend vinden: je schrijft uit en ik roep uit
THERE COMES A TIME
TO SEE, FEEL AND (here I whisper) heaeaeaearrrrrrr
WHEN THE (very hard ) BIG (less hard) PICTURE
and so on...
killea: Miepele, are you saying I am a self-destructing killer drone?????
thanks for coming along on the flight....
xx
j - jamal
I follow Miepe....you write with so much inner-power...
Destined to be....so beautiful so true
thank you for reminding me
xxx
killea: Thank you so much for your fine FB, Jamal
xx
j - tessy
Heel mooi
killea: Thank you Tessy
xx
j - alie_jankind
wees wie je bent, mag zijn
mooi vers
groeten
killea: Thank you Alie
xx
j - secret
prachtig
typerend ook dat ik je lees
als ik altijd zo even met mezelf zit
killea: Thank you, secret
xx
j - GoNo2
Subliem!
killea: many thanks, Noel
xx
j - JakobRo
be who you are
(and stay that way)
beautiful and strong poem!
killea: Thank you, Jakob
xxx
j - Mistaker
So true!
Greta xx
killea: thank you Greta
xx
j
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