When you left on the train so long ago
I watched until it turned the bend
And despite all the plans we'd made
I already felt it was the end
You didn't even have the guts to phone
To tell me we were done
A month later your letter arrived
Saying it was just a bit of fun
And a lot of bla bla bla -
You needed to be free
To get on with your fabulous life
Your heart didn't beat for me
Well let me tell you how I felt
I cried buckets and buckets of tears
I never thought I'd get over it
Believe me, it took a couple of years
I adored you with my heart and soul
You'd said you loved me too
You were the love of my life
But you didn't have a clue
Now when I drive to a place down south
I pass through a village that bears your name
Your memory shoots into my head
And I must admit, I find it pretty lame
But that's the thing with unrequited love
One never forgets the pain
Like a drug that makes you feel good, then bad
It drives you totally insane.
feedback van andere lezers
killea: Thank you, Lief
Isla Margharita, Carolina, Elizabethstown?Can go on for hours and hours ;0)
I had again the f..king same experience She did t even have the guts to call, knew her for 14 years, and married for three..
killea: One shouldn't kiss and tell.........................but what the heck!
Thanks for feedback, Francis
Recht in de roos!!
wat een exacte beschrijving van afwijzing door een écht geliefde!
(ik heb een vraagje
Killea is toch geen beetje dialect voor Kill you?? :):):) )
killea: Thanks. Killea is an old family name. Irish, in fact. Kil means church or wood, and lea means meadow. There is a village named Killea in the county of Waterford, Ireland.
killea: Thank you so much for your feedback.
Move on, leave it behind.
killea: did that long ago.
beetje plat engels, makkelijk rijm en nogal directe boodschap
past eerder in songteksten dan in gedichten denk ik...
een verhaalgedciht dat klinkt als een lied ...
lost love ...
killea: thank you
super! *aqua moet nu haasten naar het werk..*
killea: Thank you, Angel.
Heel knap werkje, goed gedaan, groetjes.
killea: Thank you, otiske
Deze kende ik nog niet van je.
killea: Thank you, sweetheart
killea: knuffels back
thanks mon capitain