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Two Worlds

door killea

Since I can remember I've lived in two worlds
Since you can remember you were the world
In my world there are no lies or manipulations
In your world truth is hard to find
In my world people are sincere and integer
In your world they throw daggers in one's back
In my world friends and love are synonymous
In your world friends are useful
I my world I can function on any level
In your world I can barely function at all
In my world God is one with the beauty of nature
In your world God is a dysfunctional warrior
In my world I can be myself
In your world I must wear a mask
In my world things are simple and I am understood
In your world everything is problematic

I go to my world as often as I can
The art, the books and dreams keep me stable
But you always drag me back into your world
filled with finance, greed, lust and the clinically insane.

In my world my cup runneth over
In your world I lost the cup.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • matahari
    It seams he is not your cup of thee!

    liefs matahari
    killea: Yeah!

    thanks, June
  • jamal
    I'm glad to be part of your world Killea!

    greetings

    Jamal
    killea: And I am glad you are!

    Thanxx
    June
  • Francis
    Just two worlds hey?! You lucky b... :0)
    xx Frans message received loud and clear
    killea: Any more and I may be locked up???
    thanks
    June
  • alie_jankind
    Hoe dubbel twee werelden zijn!
    Keep your cup!

    groeten
    killea: Thanks


    June
  • aquaangel
    . . . .
    killea: thanks,
    June
  • stater
    my personal interpretation of your special poem: both points in everyone.. continually struggling for victory.. a lovely poem, June..

    cheerio, Stater
    killea: You got it!
    Thanks

    June
  • Magdalena
    ik volg Francis: slechts twee????

    maar: prachtig gedicht die perfect past op mijn huidige woede op 1 persoon

    XXXX
    killea: Thank you, Magdalena

    xx
    June
  • lin
    This is struggling for balance, lovely poem, gr lin
    killea: Appreciate your feedback. Thank you.

    xx
    June
  • otiske
    Heel knap neergezet, zo is het ook, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you so much, Otiske.
    xx
    June
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