< terug
what
what would they call it
if I summoned attention
to the cast-offs from failures
who used to feel good there
and so wary of venturing
"it was surely worth trying"
would it be worth a mention
what would I show them
maybe something that's fading
I could try to deny it
but they'd say it was tarnished
and it wasn't worth saving
it was mine for the making
what would they hear now
could it be someone laughing
on a misty slope waiting
for the dawning while passing
his solitude by
could it be someone laughing
feedback van andere lezers- lucky
gelezen, maar je weet inmiddels dat ik verder opmerkingen hier voorbij laat gaan vanwege mijn engels backlash: Genoteerd lucky, en je weet inmiddels ook dat ik het lezen apprecieer. - otiske
Goed geschreven, groetjes. backlash: Dank je o'tje. Ik heb de dubbele titel hier ook maar snel verwijderd, na een terechte opmerking van lucky. Groetekes - lief
perfectly good poem!
liefs backlash: Dank je, lieve lieve. - Klaver4
The fool on the hill....
what... the fuck do they know!, denk ik hierbij
Nice ! !
grz
klaver4 backlash: Thx, nu pas zie ik de overeenkomst !
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