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I Always Wear Black

door killea

When you robbed me of my childhood
Didn't you know my life would be a mess
Couldn't you see the pain you caused me
Didn't you know, couldn't you guess
It was so long ago, you say
I must look forward, and not back
And you wonder why
I always wear black
The colour suits me
and serves me well
To mourn the little girl
Who went through hell
A child so good and innocent
Never causing any strife
Trying to survive…..
Ever in fear for her life
Her spirit broken
Everything resolved with a whack
She disappeared within herself
Never to come back
And I will forever wear black

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • sneakers1982
    tragic.. I always wear black, too btw
    killea: Thank you, Benny.

    June
  • marrik
    Ik draag heel veel zwart.Dat doe ik om de betere tijden niet te vergeten.

    But the poëm is so sad and beautifull at the same time.
    A true masterpiece...
    killea: Black, means many things to many people.
    xx
    June
  • lief
    love this poem in black!

    liefs
    killea: Thank you, Lief Appreciate you FB
    xx
    June
  • matahari
    Het kind zal in het wit zijn weg terug vinden.
    mooi gedicht

    liefs matahari
    killea: Thanks, Matahari

    xx
    June
  • Mistaker
    Johnny Cash achterna?

    Groet,
    Greta
    killea: A boy named Sue?
    xx
    June
  • JC
    back in black..
    nee, serieus nu: erg sterke tekst
    killea: Appreciate your FB, thanks JC
    xx
    June
  • otiske
    Heel mooi gedicht dit, knap neergezet, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you, Otiske
    xx
    June
  • klaver4
    Noir c'est noir, il n'y plus d'espoir zong Johnny Halliday.
    I often see women wearing black, always black, and then often, I ask myself, could it be that...
    Saddening but beautifully written!
    klaver4
    killea: thank you Klaver4, appreciate you FB
    xx
    June
  • aquaangel
    I am also the lady in black xxx nice poem
    killea: I could have guessed!
    xx
    June
  • Francis
    I wear black on the outside cause black is how I feel on the inside (The smiths)
    Gr xx
    killea: Black, black, black is the colour of your true love's hair.....
    xx
    June
  • Magdalena
    amaai,
    oprecht applaus hiervoor!

    (ik heb verdikke juist gezien dat ik fameus achter geraakt ben met lezen!)

    XXX
    killea: Thanks Magdalena, so pleased you read me.

    xx
    J
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