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Number 7
faceless love
grip on my heart
so much to say
can't speak a word
and hear nothing
from north to south
and back again
the line open
I feel the pain
it's something
can't explain
number 7
in my head
makes me crazy
nails are red
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Great !!
Knap gebracht, groetjes en graag gelezen. killea: Thanks for reading me and fb, frank
xx - jan
probably his housenumber, I got 7 women on my mind, I take it easy, why don't you with only one!
grts killea: Jan, you lucky man!
xx - Mistaker
I got seven days to live my life or seven ways to die...
Beautiful poem.
Regards,
Greta
killea: Thank you Greta.
xx
June - klaver4
speeddial number on your phone perhaps ?
sounds very much like a painful experience!
xx
klaver4 killea: Thank you, Klaver4, where would we be without them?
xx - miepe
"zeven" kan soms lang duren als het op zich laat wachten
zucht
mooi gedicht! killea: Yes Miepe,
thanks
xx - jamal
'nails are red....'
It seems like you're looking good for his pleasure, all dressed up and a snowwhite laugh...but like you wrote you're bleeding inside... number 7 is a spiritual thing, in my perception. it gives
hope and strength...hold on to it June!
xx killea: You may be spot on, Jamal, but that would be telling. Thanks for reading my work and the great fb.
xx
june - marrik
Wanneer vinden mensen zoals jij en ik nu eens wat rust in ons lijf?
Voor jou is het nummer 7, voor mij? Ik weet het nog niet.
love for U killea: Back at you, babe
xx - lucky
graag gelezen killea: Thanks, Lucky
xx
j - Francis
red nails
white stockings
nice..mm
Gr Frans
xx killea: Thank you, frans
xx
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