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Salty Rivers

door killea

child stop your crying
you have your life ahead
success, and fulfillment
don't tell or you're dead
innocence is no big deal
a perfunctory pat on the head
you tell anyone, I'm warning you
so menacingly gentle, he said
child stop your crying now
as he crept out of the bed

forever flow the salty rivers
since the first time she bled

feedback van andere lezers

• Julien_Maleur
  Very fine poem. Makes me thinking about a lot of things. I wonder : is it because she bled for the first time that she is crying?
  greetings
  JM
  killea: No, julien it's because she was raped as a child - read it again, love.
  
  xx
  j
• aquaangel
  sad poem..
  mixed aqua emotions
  killea: Thnk you sweet angel, appreciate you reading my stuff!
  xxx
  j
• marrik
  Vanaf toen enkel droge inwendige tranen.
  
  sad,
  but beautyfull
  
  M
  killea: Thank you so much.
  xxx
  j
• Klaver4
  this one is raw and straight to the bone !
  very macabre
  xx
  Klaver4
  killea: Felt sick writing it, but had to go on!
  xxx
  j
• innerchild
  Zo droef ...
  killea: Thank you
  xx
  j
• DeKoeneRidder
  very intense......
  
  XXX
  
  JS
  killea: Thank you, love
  xx
  j
• otiske
  Great!! Goed weergegeven, graag gelezen.
  Groetjes.
  killea: thank you, otiske
  
  xx
  j
• Francis
  And the salt bites in his eyes
  x
  killea: forever!
  
  xx
  j