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Middle Name

door killea

swept into my life
it was instant rapport
nothing less
and nothing more
your talent and your honesty
made my heart soar
you made me laugh
every brief encounter
I miss that in every way
quite honestly
I miss you every day
I know you think I'm strange
but that too is okay
you love to step into my world
at least that's what you say
heart and mind do not agree
I admit I'm a little astray
but from a distance, my friend
I will love you anyway
how much, you'll never get to know
no button for replay
silently my tears flow
as I wait for the end of day
each day the same emotional train
and I wonder how long I can play
on this matter, the above
is all I have to say
things are as they are
and will remain the same
only wish I could remember
your classy middle name

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • marrik
    10 X uitstekend.

    No one knows how much.

    This one's for you

    pain
    seen much
    been through enough
    starts all over again
    hopefully


    XXX
    killea: thanks, darling
    XXXX
    j
  • jan
    suggestie: it was instant poetry...

    grts
    killea: Thank you for reading me and Fb

    xx
    j
  • Klaver4
    very beautiful and sensitive, June !
    perhaps it was Noblesse ? :o)
    ps: you'll never get know ?
    xx
    Klaver4


    killea: perhaps it is...
    thanks have corrected the ommission
    you see, i need you, my lovely editor!!!
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Beautiful poem, this one.

    Regards,
    Greta
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • innerchild
    Je titel bracht me meteen bij Hooverphonic ...

    "trouble is my middle name.
    But in the end I'm not too bad"

    Gevoelig geschreven ...

    Liefs,
    Inner
    killea: Thank you for reading me, Innerchild

    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    Great!!! I was waiting but then I realised that I don't have a middle name :0(( Big huggles.

    XXX

    JS
    killea: yes you do, Braveheart

    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Nice one, goed geschreven en graag gelezen, groetjes.
    killea: thank you so much, Otiske.

    xx
    j
  • Francis
    The ink almost drips teardrops from the paper, so sad
    mmm
    xx

    killea: xx
    j
  • lucky
    ontroerend
    killea: Thank you

    j
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