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So Clear
shivering with cold
in a room so warm
the fever back
wait for dawn
wrap myself
in the words you said
a promise made
sad feeling fed
half of life
is spent in bed
burning so severe
touch me
remove the fear
sometimes
everything is so clear
feedback van andere lezers- marrik
words are all we can give you.
words of love and hope.
words can take care, take away.
but words can also give
M
killea: Thank you, love
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
I hold you tight even if it is only in my mind....
X With love, JOHN
killea: Thank you, Braveheart
xx
j - matahari
Toch een warm gedicht. Mooi
liefs matahari
killea: Thank you,matahari
xx
j - alie_jankind
soms is het helder ... gelukkig maar!
hartelijke groet
killea: thank you
xx
j - otiske
Heel mooi dit werkje om van te genieten.
Graag gelezen, groetjes.
killea: Thank you Frank, appreciate your FB always
xx
j - Klaver4
so clear, perhaps if and only then when they react as was hoped for...
very nice !
is spent a bed=> in a bed; or , a bet or , a bed ??
xx
klaver4
killea: IN BED of course - I can't live without you my dear editor!
thanks you so much
xx
j - Francis
clear and breakable as glass
gr.
xx
killea: Thank you, darling
xx
j - yellow
amazing poem, short but strong, hey your poem from yesterday, points, wel done J.
Marc
xxx
killea: Thank you Marc, surprised!
love
June
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