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Shout it Out
when we meet in my pub
will you recognize me
amongst the hub
and will you go with me
to a quieter place
where we can embrace
let the energy flow
so may be
love can grow
or will the sound of hello
be the final blow
to this fragile
song we both know
we sang for a while
and made us smile
and reconcile
again in the rain
after a thousand tears
forget the years
we missed out
overcome our fears
shout it out
this is what it's all about
feedback van andere lezers- Klaver4
very delicate! time takes its share, hopefully for the better !
suggestion perhaps: alter some of the and in the and-sentences ? e.g. and the energy can flow
so may be
love can grow
..
xx
klaver4
killea: Anything you say K4 - took a whole lot of ands out. Wrote under the influence of some strange medicine from the doc today. It has made me sleep all day - so now I can howl all night.!!!
Thanks, darling
xx
j - anne
Nice songtext, i try to find some notes for it; ok?
killea: Will sit at my piano straight away!
thanks Anne
xx
j - matahari
Heel mooi, maar intriest.
Knuffel matahari
killea: thanks, Matahari
xx
j - Francis
I know he ll recognize you
xx
How could he miss you?
killea: Thank You, Frans
xx
j - otiske
Weer een heel mooi werkje maar zo triest.
Knap weergegeven, goed gedaan, groetjes.
killea: You're too kind, Otiske, many thanks
xx
j - marrik
Ik weet zeker dat je gezien wordt.
Chear up dear.
XX
killea: Thank you, dear M
xx
j - aquaangel
rocco again?? :)
killea: Thanks, Angelface
xx
j - yellow
love this poem too, you know i was joking with the x and the oui, i really hope you find much luck xxxx
killea: I know babe,
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
j
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