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Stake My Claim
I thought I knew it all
till you knocked on my heart's door
entered, taking me where
I've never been before
to places new for me
I thrill to be taught more
so I too can see
the miracle taking place
the reflection of me
in your beloved face
I'll never be the same
as I get through the night
sometimes still in pain
my demons I can fight
knowing it won't be long
your sweet words
making me strong
and as the day draws nigh
my enemy looks tame
can't help but sigh
say your precious name
hoping I alone
can stake my claim
feedback van andere lezers- marrik
Strong poëm.
M killea: thanks you, sweet man
xx
j - aquaangel
ZO MOOI, als het in het Engels klinkt, de rijm
prachtig! killea: Thank you Angelface
xx
j - lief
as the day draws nighT
nice poem
liefs killea: Thank you, precious
xx
j - Francis
something like the same way over here
xx killea: good for you, darling
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
I close mijn bij Aquaangel on. In het Engels is de rijm veel mooier.
Love it!!!
XXX DKR killea: Thank you, Braveheart
xxx
j - jan
until the next teardrops falls..
xxx killea: That's always the way, Jan
xx
j - yellow
waarom doe je het gedicht nu weg?
ik mailde je juist,
zoals altijd vind ik bovenstaande ook zeer mooi,
groetjes,
Marc killea: thanks will put it back on now
xxx
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