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Advice from and Old Friend

door killea

how do I know this is real
the illusions of another life
how can I trust what I feel
being used to so much strife
when will the answers be shown
to questions I dare not ask
have I not outgrown
the devil's pathetic mask
again and again I sip from the glass
of liquid so smooth and fine
this life is at an impasse
imagination always divine
create the chaos it is your right
the old one whispers in my ear
stars were in disarray on the night
when you were born my dear
and I'll be with you to the end
though your angels call your name
take advice from this old friend
there'll be no gain without some pain
have another drink, and I do so
at the bottom of the glass sits the master
holding a gem with a glorious glow
and I take it, though it spells disaster

feedback van andere lezers

• miepe
  Ben geen Engel in het Engels, maar staat er geen foutje in the title?
  
  en verder deed ik mijn best om het te begrijpen
  klinkt mooi
  naais
  killea: Could be you're right, maybe not - only time will tell.
  thank you for lovely fb
  xx
  j
• marrik
  Lieverd
  
  Ik heb de meester in mijn lege glas gevonden,maar is was er neit kapot van.
  Ik heb liever de les van de oude vriend in peroon.
  
  XX
  M
  killea: thank you, my dear
  ]xx
  j
• otiske
  Verdrink de meester!!
  Goed weergegeven, mooi om te lezen, groetjes.
  killea: Thank you so much, dear otiske
  xx
  j
• lief
  running on empty...
  
  liefs
  killea: not a drop left, lovely lief
  xx
  j
• DeKoeneRidder
  Geweldig dear!!!!
  
  XXXX DCR
  killea: Appreciate your lovely FB, BH
  xx
  j
• yellow
  Ik stel me nu zo'n nachtclub voor waar twee vrienden zitten te drinken en elkaar raad geven,
  groetjes,
  Marc
  killea: I've written something like that before, read Speak of the Devil if you like, Marc Thanks for great fB
  xx
  j
• alie_jankind
  niet te diep in het glaasje kijken ...
  je gedicht graag gelezen
  
  groeten
  killea: thank you Alie
  xx
  j
• Mistaker
  Very nice poem!
  
  Greta x
  killea: Thank you, Greta
  xx
  j
• jamal
  Deep, very deep June!
  
  xx
  killea: Thank you Jamal
  xx
  j
• Francis
  And Sheila take a bow (the smiths)
  No worries Oz
  xx
  killea: Good on you, mate
  xx
  j
• jan
  old love please, leave me alone...
  
  liefs jan
  killea: Sorry, sweetheart, will try to do that
  xxx
  j