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Serendipity

door killea

there were so many signs leading to you
mystical coincidences, and in the night
an angel, I think, gave me the final push

now we have broken, and spoken
opened up to each other's worlds
feeling love pure unfurled

we agreed never to promise
that which we cannot keep,
but to keep each promise made

and I will hold true
what you gave my heart
and undernourished soul

today, tomorrow and forever
I will love you, close or afar
as my lover, confidant or friend

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • lief
    it should always be like that, don't make promises
    you can't keep...
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you Liefie
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Thank you love.Remember. I will always love, but you never know how much.

    XXX
    M
    killea: No I never will.
    xx
    j
  • matahari
    Ben diep gelukkig dat jouw vertrouwen niet werd beschaamd!

    Heel veel liefs xx matahari
    killea: thank you, matahari
    xxx
    j
  • nero
    Broken and spoken - combination I don't understand - but I'm sure you 'll explain sometime.
    Love xxx Nero
    killea: Yes, perhaps I will
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I like this poem very much!

    Greta x
    killea: Thank you Greta love, your FB so generous
    xxx
    j
  • lin
    prachtig, werkelijk vertederend mooi, liefs lin
    killea: Thank you ever so much, lin
    \xx
    J
  • Vanes
    the word serendipity is poem in itself, beautiful!
    killea: Is'nt it just a word to love
    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    It's a shame to read such a drame in this beautifull poem!

    XXX MQ

    YBH
    killea: All poems are drama of one kind or the other, BH
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    honesty is the finest virtue...
    xx
    j

    killea: Thank you, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Francis
    Broken?
    Is it riellie riellie broken???
    Hope you don t recycle him if its such a good friend friends of ya
    Real friends are collectorsitems these days
    BEAu- beau- beau- Beautifull poem Junie
    xx


    killea: thanks, thanks, thanks -
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    very beautifull lovely poem,
    greetzzz,
    Marc
    killea: Thank you,love
    ]xx
    j
  • Rob
    Toevalstreffer dus. _________^_^
    killea: Don't believe in coincidences, Rob
    thanks for fb
    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Heel zacht en zuiver werkje.
    Dit is een heel mooi gedicht.
    Knap gedaan, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you for great fb, otiske
    xxx
    j
  • Klaver4
    very fragile but decided as well!
    can either go way when you read it; a restart of something old or something completely new;
    the 'or' in the last sentence makes you imagine an extra line: time will tell which one of the three. Or did you mean 'and' instead..:o)
    very nice June !! going strong !
    xx
    dicky
    killea: You are too kind with your lovely FB
    thanks Dicky
    j
  • backlash
    True love knows no past tense, distance or conditions ...
    xx
    G.
    killea: Thank you so much Backlash

    xx
    j
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