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Confusion Reigns Supreme
I tell you nearly all my secrets
in the little time we have
you shake your head
point with a fag between your fingers
judgemental you're not
but friendly warnings you blow my way
you tell me I'm nuts, crazy and bad
so bad, I know it makes you glad to know me
then you make me laugh with your comments
on where I will live in a month's time
and that I have to spill the beans
a big smile on your face
when I tell you it's all your fault anyway
confusion reigns supreme
you don't see the connection and laugh it off
bizarre, weird, outrageous woman
so outrageous, I know it makes you glad to know me
you say I've taken the wrong turn
actually, you see my point and enjoy the quirky stories
I peel like an onion, so many teary layers
of sadness and laughter, sometimes a mixture of both
and the perverse thrill of my heading for disaster
makes us both laugh in daft anticipation
and I know it makes you glad to know me
even though you're the one to blame.
feedback van andere lezers- jan
let me guess you live in an onion?
grts killea: Indeed I do! Jan
xxx
j - nero
10 on a scale of 5 ?
Love - xx - Nero killea: Thank you sweetheart
xx
j - marrik
wat kan ik nu nog schrijven?
XXXX
M killea: You always have something to say????
xxxxxx
j - Mistaker
I like the title ánd the poem!
Greta x killea: Thank you Greta
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
Nice poem IQ but like Elvis already sang "We have a quarrel, a lover's spat" For inspiration is it a gift but it hurts U2 too. Try to become friends again, you also M.
ALL THE LOVE AND LUCK THERE IS TO YOU TWO!!!
XXX MQ DKR killea: We're cool. thanks for FB
xx
j - Rob
"you tell me I'm nuts, crazy and bad"
Take it as a "compliment".
killea: I do, thanks Rob
xx
j - Francis
Beans beans??
It must be very personal..this poem
Only the one who it s written too will understand.
Heading for disaster
Be carefull lady who youre dealing with, I mean I don t know but he/ she looks dangerous to me...
Do you like LinzeN??
XX killea: Do you?
xxx
j - Magdalena
It feels like a living heart, captured and fascinated by someone who systematically hides his true face behind Reason. The heart reads the truth, like a child.
Karine killea: Thanks, Magdalena
xx
j - yellow
take love and hate,
melt it together
and then you get a poeme like this,
greetzzzz,
Marc
(I know my Englisch is not the best but I try) killea: There is no hate, but a great friendship, nothing needs to melt!
xxxx
j - lief
in every dreamhouse a heartache,
sometimes it's a new one...
xxx
liefs
killea: Tjis poem was just for a very good friend. thanks for FB. liefie
xxx
j - matahari
Geschonden vertrouwen heeft niets te maken met schuld!
Niets met jou of diegene waar je dit gedicht aan schrijft. Kan me echt niet voorstellen dat die persoon je nuts, crazy and bad zou noemen want daar is geen reden toe. Misschien dat ze heel spontaan reageerde en eerlijke spontaniteiet is nooit fout, in
het slechtste geval naief. Denk niet dat zij een vrouw is die oordeeld of veroordeeld wel voelt , aanvoelt en conclusies trekt.
Heimelijk lachen ligt niet in haar karakter, uitlachen evenmin.
Haar levensmoto lijkt me "Leven en laten leven" in respect voor ieders eigenheid, hoeft geen reden te zijn voor haar om je voor schut te laten zetten.
liefs matahari
liefs matahari killea: Matahari, thank you for your wonderful FB, and for reading me love
xxxx
j - otiske
Zo gaat het is het leven.
Goed onder woorden gebracht.
Graag gelezen, groetjes. killea: Thanks Otiske
xxxx
j
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