naam:
	pass:
	wachtwoord vergeten?

Volg ons op facebook

Ga naar chat

< terug

Whispers In His Ear

door killea

Again he sits at the bar
drinking his usual beer
wondering if this latest row
will be the straw
that breaks his fragile bond

then she stands behind him
and whispers in his ear
she takes him by the hand
leads him out of there
back to the battle ground

in the silent truce
love takes the lead
between the sheets
a new deal is sealed
the bond is redefined

and he holds her tight
to allay his fears
regrets the words spoken
tears hide a swallowed pride
and she whispers in his ear...

feedback van andere lezers

• Mistaker
  And there they go again!
  
  Greta x
  killea: Thank you Greta
  xx
  j
• lief
  more you horny BEER!
  xx
  liefs
  
  
  
  killea: Thank you Liefie
  xxx
  j
• DeKoeneRidder
  Nice poem, hang in there!
  
  Hugs, love & XXX. BH
  killea: thks
  j
• aquaangel
  bier=beer?
  
  
  killea: Thanks Angelface
  xxx
  j
• nero
  Some lucky guy...
  xxx - Nero
  killea: Yes, but he doesn't know it! thanks for FB
  xxx
  j
• marrik
  Tell me more dear.I need it so bad.
  
  XX
  M
  killea: No, we don't want confusion to reign supreme, my love
  xxxx
  j
• yellow
  te moeilijk om in het Engels te antwoorden,
  ik vind het een mooi en vertederend gedicht dat je zeer beeldend beschrijft,
  ik zie als het ware hem zitten aan de toog in hopeloosheid tot zij op hem toestapt,
  mooi!!!
  groetjes,
  Marc
  killea: Thank you very much, Marc
  xxx
  j
• backlash
  It sounds as if they understand each other after all. Over and over again, like a well-rehearsed play ...
  xx
  b
  killea: Thanks you backlash, it seems that way.
  xxxx
  j
• lucky
  Wat een teder gedicht
  vind 'whispers' een mooi woord
  killea: Thank you Lucky
  xx
  j
• jan
  I've had too much..
  
  untill the next time..
  
  grtzzzzzz!
  
  killea: Okay love,
  xx thanks
  j
• otiske
  Supermooi en beeldend weergegeven. Knap bedacht.
  Graag gelezen, groetjes.
  killea: Thank you so much, Otiske
  xx
  j