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You, Me, Us and Jewish Dumplings

door killea

all I want to feel
see, hear, touch
and hold
in that way is
you

in a beautiful
moment of
tenderness you said
you would die for
me

since our time
together remember gently
the laughter, and love
and that for now life is good to
us

and we always have Jewish dumplings!


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • DeKoeneRidder
    A beauty this poem, written from the heart!

    XXX & Hugs, BH
    killea: Thanks, BH
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    You have sweet memory's and now they are painfull
    en you wish you can turn back the time,
    nice poem, It feels a little bit sad
    and that's why it's hit me.

    sweets,
    Marc
    killea: Thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    I love this..

    grtzz
    killea: So glad you do, my darling
    xxx
    j
  • nero
    Nice and touching
    Love - xxx - Nero
    killea: Yes, it was supposed to be and thank you for your lovely FB
    xxxx
    j
  • aquaangel
    nice
    killea: thank you angelface
    xx
    j
  • lonely1
    a wonderful touching and moving poem,

    the last sentance makes me think of casablanca 'we always have paris'
    beautiful !

    xxx hilde
    killea: Thank you, Hilde
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    yes, we can have...
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you, Liefie
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Very nice!

    Greta x
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Ik zal stil zijn over deze.

    X
    M
    killea: Yes, I thought you would
    xxx
    j
  • backlash
    A very, very sweet one, with a nice, light touch at the end.
    xx
    b
    killea: thks b
    xxx
    j
  • otiske
    Ssssssst.
    Greetz.
    killea: Thank you so much, Otiske
    xxx
    j
  • lucky
    mooi.
    killea: Thanks, Lucky
    xxx
    j
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