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The Green Man

door killea

The colour purple all around
sends the ghosts running away
except the green man
green and purple go well together, and he laughs

the sun seldom reaches the back of the room
through the dark curtains of a life
distorting the reality of the confusion
and authenticity of existence

pain and despair, as lethal and addictive
as the prescribed medication by those
who should know better, but who do not care
floating along the calm waters, with heavy undercurrents

one more dead, who would notice really
a few mourn, for them a new dawn, with curtains drawn
rid of the excruciating sorrow which will follow me
forever into the night and stalk me all day

fake a smile, the monkey whispers, and play the part
given to you in this theatre of fools, and as he drools
his filthy slime, it clouds the vision and rubbing eyes
only reveals the green man again, and he laughs

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • matahari
    "The color purple" een heel mooie film! Knap gedicht

    liefs matahari
    killea: Thank you Matahari
    xxx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    A very special view on life's strange ways. A beauty IQ !!!!!

    Love XXX DKR
    killea: Thank you, DKR
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Don't like the movie but this poem...yes I do!

    Greta x
    killea: thank you, Greta
    xxx
    j
  • Francis
    not dead yet..
    xx
    killea: Thanks Frans
    xx
    j
  • lief
    and so we skate away on the thin ice of a new day...
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: The ice is always too thin, and for someone who love skating, it's a tricky business.
    love
    june
  • aquaangel
    ik vond de film wel interessant
    het gedicht also xx
    killea: I don't know the film, this is just a poem from moi! Thanks for FB Angleface
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    poetry in a higher level,
    fantastic June,
    greetzzz,
    Marc
    killea: Thank you so much Marc, appreciate your FB always.
    xx
    j
  • jan
    makes me think of the Green Manalishi..

    xxx
    j
    killea: Could be him????
    thanks
    Jan
  • marrik
    Heel mooi.Moet nadenken over deze.

    XX
    M
    killea: thank you, darling
    xxx
    j
  • eisenik
    niet echt denderend engels en heel veel 'gekende' beeldspraak maar wel helder en oprecht
    killea: Thank you Eisenik, will have to look up what denderend means
    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Voor zover ik mijn Engels onder de knie heb ziet het er zeer mooi uit.
    Knap geschreven, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you Otiske
    xxxx
    h
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