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Goodbye ( 3 elfjes)

door killea

another
goodbye is
inevitable and another
and another and another
goodbye

into
my arms
they shall run
bringing a glimpse of
sun


painful
memories alone
shall cover me
like the last stone
goodbye


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    bye bye love
    goodbye happiness
    hello loneliness
    I think I'm gonna cry...

    nice elfjes June!
    xx
    j

    killea: Thanks for FB,
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    goodbye my love goodbye...
    an old song from demis roussos...
    Do you know the song,
    A goodbye can hurt sometimes
    but waving the past for a better future...

    I also hope it's not a goodbye from this side.
    sweets,
    Marc
    killea: Thanks \MARC,
    XXX
    J
  • aquaangel
    nr 3 spreekt me erg aan. X x x
    killea: tHNK you Angel
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    The last one is stonehard! ....

    xx
    killea: yes it was meant to be.
    xxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    Excellent poetry!
    killea: Thnk you, xxx\j
  • lief
    three times a beautiful goodbye!
    xxx
    liefs


    killea: Thank you Liefie
    xx
    j
  • b_engel
    knap gedaan
    de 3e lees ik het vaakst

    killea: Many thanks for FB, b. engel
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Goodbey is for the pitty ones.
    Your strong.So goodbey is no good.
    Catch you later dear.

    XX
    M

    killea: Thanks for your confidence in moi, see you tomorrow.
    xxx
    j
  • anne
    Don't leave us killea!
    killea: No not yet, Anne thks for FB
    xxx
    j
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