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Nemesis

door killea

What is to do when the one you love doesn't love you
no force in the world can undo heartache so painfully blue
as you quietly leave me behind oceans of tears will ensue

left shattered as broken glass on a concrete floor
none shall see the misery unfurl behind my forever closed door
nothing shall ever be the same as before

despite all our differences it is agonizingly true
the hopelessness of a passion I never before knew
I will eternally be in love with you

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    I know that fealing,

    there was a time I had black thoughts
    when I saw no reason to live

    I never forget that time and it was just the love for 1 woman,
    now, love is not forever, I try to live today,
    just learn to love myself a liitle bit more

    love,

    Marc
    killea: Thank you dear man, xxx j
  • lief
    all is fair in love June
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Nothing is really ever fair! thks for FB
    j
  • feniks
    The advantage of the english language is that whatever you write, it allways sounds like a fantastic poem.

    And so does this one...
    Beautiful agony... :)

    grtz feniks
    killea: Thank you so much Feniks
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    Keep on loving him with the same passion. As if he's a captain on a big ship: needs to travel and find out, before returning to the home where he is loved.

    XXX
    killea: Nice idea, Magdalena
    xxx
    j
  • jack
    Don't you mean nemesis instead of nemises?
    ;)
    Jack
    killea: Of course I do! Thanks Jack
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    de laatste strofe zegt alles...

    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you Jan
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    ween, ween
    om een onbeantwoorde liefde
    zwaarden die het hart doorkliefde
    leer hem eren
    en je liefde niet te negeren


    XX
    M
    killea: Been there, done that, you know M

    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    de woorden die je neerzet zijn mooi
    toch leest je vers niet vlot
    misschien wel door de (gedwongen) rijm ...

    hartelijke groet
    killea: Thank you, Alie
    xx
    j
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