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Nemesis
What is to do when the one you love doesn't love you
no force in the world can undo heartache so painfully blue
as you quietly leave me behind oceans of tears will ensue
left shattered as broken glass on a concrete floor
none shall see the misery unfurl behind my forever closed door
nothing shall ever be the same as before
despite all our differences it is agonizingly true
the hopelessness of a passion I never before knew
I will eternally be in love with you
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I know that fealing,
there was a time I had black thoughts
when I saw no reason to live
I never forget that time and it was just the love for 1 woman,
now, love is not forever, I try to live today,
just learn to love myself a liitle bit more
love,
Marc
killea: Thank you dear man, xxx j - lief
all is fair in love June
xxx
liefs
killea: Nothing is really ever fair! thks for FB
j - feniks
The advantage of the english language is that whatever you write, it allways sounds like a fantastic poem.
And so does this one...
Beautiful agony... :)
grtz feniks
killea: Thank you so much Feniks
xxx
j - Magdalena
Keep on loving him with the same passion. As if he's a captain on a big ship: needs to travel and find out, before returning to the home where he is loved.
XXX
killea: Nice idea, Magdalena
xxx
j - jack
Don't you mean nemesis instead of nemises?
;)
Jack
killea: Of course I do! Thanks Jack
xxx
j - jan
de laatste strofe zegt alles...
xxx
j
killea: thank you Jan
xx
j - marrik
ween, ween
om een onbeantwoorde liefde
zwaarden die het hart doorkliefde
leer hem eren
en je liefde niet te negeren
XX
M
killea: Been there, done that, you know M
xx
j - alie_jankind
de woorden die je neerzet zijn mooi
toch leest je vers niet vlot
misschien wel door de (gedwongen) rijm ...
hartelijke groet
killea: Thank you, Alie
xx
j
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