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Barcelona

door killea

I thought of you a long time ago my beautiful man
tall and dark haired, you took my hand and lead me to show
all the art there was to see in the place you had made your home
where you painted in your studio space, an artist yet unknown to the world
your talent grew with every painting, your future would slowly be unfurled.

Humour and excitement in every fibre of your being, your energy contagious
to all around you, known in every café and bistro you took me
La Rambla, a gathering of friends you introduced me to
and as we walked, you holding my hand, I was so proud, you were so grand
my blood, my soul, my heart were in union, with pure love your vigour our band.

Two days Barcelona, gave me back my strength, and belief in myself
you are the continuation, the remover of my grief, and I love you
with the years even more than could have been expected
a man of exceptional genius, real beauty in life appreciated
city of stimulating thrills and colour, my horror of last week completely abated.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yzQtEk9CzCA

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    amazing poem, i give some fb on freaks for this,
    M.
    love
    xxx
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    love
    June
  • jack
    Nice work!
    killea: thank you so much, my dear Jack
    xxx
    j
  • suasso
    Dat is reuzegezellie geweest!
    suasso
    killea: Many thanks for your FB Suasso
    xxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    Great piece!
    xx
    killea: Thank you ever so much,
    xxxxx
    j
  • aquaangel
    i'd liked rome more hi hi x
    killea: And I loved Venicia more, but Barcelona has a beat all its own.
    Had a great time. thanks fr fb
    xxxx for angelface
  • jan
    I've been there, beautiful city

    xxx
    j
    killea: yes it is, Jan
    thanks for FB

    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Kwou dak dáár was

    XX
    M
    killea: wish you were too
    thanks
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I prefer Berlin ;-)
    Beautiful poem!

    Greta x
    killea: Thank you Mistaker, xxx.j
  • alie_jankind
    mooi hoe je dit beeld tekent ...
    (al zou ik een andere stad gekozen hebben ...)

    groeten
    killea: Thanks Alie
    xxx
    j
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