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door killea

silence brings the end
of something which cannot mend
once you were my friend

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    Beautiful but... a bit too simple, too shot this time

    love,
    Karine
    killea: thanks for FB
    xxx
    j
  • bragt
    prachtige ode aan 'zwijgen (stilte) is goud'
    killea: thank you bragt
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Beetje simpel uit jouw brein.

    XX
    M
    killea: Remind me to smack you the next time I see you!!
    love
    June
  • yellow
    I like your senryu very much, it's just saying something deep
    with a minimum of words

    love
    Marc
    xxx

    (misschien moet je senryu tussen haakjes naast de titel zetten)
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • jan
    what are friends few!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Jan some are good, some are good for nothing, and some are fabulous, but the real ones are truly Few
    xxxx
    j
  • Ghislaine
    Something i dont mis and dont wont. I'll alway's say no to friendschip. Not mij kind of thing
    killea: Sometimes you might miss out on something, but in the long run you may have the right attititude.
    thanks for FB
    xx
    j
  • backlash
    Silence can be a killer as well as a blessing. Three lines speak volumes.
    xx
    b.
    killea: Thank you so much, Backlash

    xxx
    June
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