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Two Letters

door killea

He wrote, "I dedicate this to you
your flirtatious charm allures my innocence into paths unknown
while your unbroken spirit unchains the restless Eve that harbours deep within
I now recognize that my inner desires are being captured
by the enticement of your primal instincts
you leave me with a burning fervour,
a passion, an intensity, that only you can pacify
I surrender myself unto you"



She wrote, "I love you."

 

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  • Vansion
    Only writing people can laugh as deep with this 'story-in a-nutshell' as I do by now. I don't know whether you do realise it, but this thing is a new kind of 'come-out' in what's really a topic in litterature. I remember a Latin letter written in the Middle-Ages by a
    killea: I know, it’s a scream…. Like the The Elegies of Tibullus. Friend and i were going through some very old letters written by great great grandfather killea to great granny. Thanks for FB xxxx J
  • Julien_Maleur
    Very nice. I wish jou a lot of pleasure with that basic instinct
    JM
    killea: It would be nice if it were written to me. thanks for fb
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    nice poem June,
    xxx
    killea: thank you, marc

    xx
    j
  • anne
    Two letters??? Much more i read but it was a nice thing to read.
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • jan
    my baby wrote me a letter, 'give me a ticket for an airplane'

    xxxx
    j
    killea: Yes that would be nice indeed!
    thanks, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    What a letters that were!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thanks, Greta
    xxx
    j
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