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Peace
Tender you spoke
long before you broke
knowing how you sleep
makes it hard not to weep
a stone is so inflexible
breaking it impossible
the spell is in your court
sold so dear, cheaply bought
distance needs to cease
reach out and let peace
return from far away
to bless us in a different way
feedback van andere lezers- alie_jankind
Hoopvol gedicht! Mooi neergezet.
groeten killea: Thank you, alie
xxx
j - jan
I wish you a very peaceful sunday June
nice words!
xxx
jw killea: Thank you Jan, same to you love
xxx
j - jamal
every day June
every day.... I hope it wil be, some day
xxx killea: Thank you Jamal
xx
j - Mistaker
Hope is the drug...
Greta x killea: thanks Greta
xx
j - backlash
"Different" seems to be the key word but I think we have to start changing our own approach to get the ball rolling ... works for me.
xxx G. killea: thanks, backlash
xx
j - b_engel
hoop is belangrijk en valse hoop bestaat niet
mooi hoopvol dicht killea: thanks b engel
xx
j - yellow
Dit is een gedicht waar je je gevoelige en zachtere kant laat zien,
anders dan je andere gedichten maar even graag gelezen,
knap en voelbaar neergezet,
Marc
xx x killea: thank you Marc
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