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Infatuated Lunatic

door killea

Blinding emotions leave me frail and insecure
what are the answers to the bombardment of issues
which continue to befall my reality in ways so uncanny
bizarre reactions, or none at all, cannot be calibrated.

No science has the answer to the matters of the heart
a bypass would give no relief to the sting of passion
sharp, it can uplift or destroy and keep one locked
away from a different authenticity, one might even enjoy.

Listen heart, are you smarter than I, can you override
every intellectual decision made, dexterously beating you
cunning collaborator, turning wisdom into nonsense
sagacity into bad judgment, you infatuated lunatic.

Giver of life, and controller of dissension!

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    a beautiful poem, confusion is palpable.
    action and reaction, it remains difficult to understand each other
    we are complex together

    how can we understand ourselves?


    love

    Marc
    xxx

    killea: Thank you, love
    xx
    j
  • lief
    you make my heart skip a beat...

    strong words June!

    liefs
    killea: thank you, Liefie darling
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    adembenemend June

    je beschrijft wel een passioneel hart, een wereldverbeterend hart.
    Niet alle harten zijn zo...

    XXX
    killea: Thank you, sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    it's crystal clear to me, don't play with fire!

    fantastic poem June!

    xxx
    jw
    killea: Thank you so much Jan, always glad to get your FB
    xxx
    j
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