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Invisible Tattoos

door killea

The past tattooed on my body and soul
not visible to the naked eye
keeps me from moving forward
go through life with an awkward smile

The present tattoo as I lie in wait
of the needle used so deftly
the artist's work so fine and delicate
the pain so sharp though I try to chill out

The future tattoo is yet to be determined
by others who have the power to subdue
and break my spirit all over again while
their rites of passage give me the blame

Invisible tattoos deep in my realm
no needle should have touched
I let in the pictures so true to life
whilst the artist destroyed my trust.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zq8NWM4PHm4

feedback van andere lezers

• drebddronefish
  Splendid use of the tattoo as a methaphor, as in life it is the ambivalence of the taboo of the naked body.
  
  greets
  killea: Thank you drebdronefish
  xxx
  j
• GoNo2
  Very good
  killea: thank you, Noel
  xxx
  j
• jack
  I like tattoos and I like this poem.
  :)
  killea: thank you, Jack
  xxx
  j
• lief
  I have none...
  
  nice poem
  
  xxx
  liefs
  killea: thank you Liefie
  xxx
  j
• Mistaker
  Can't stand the song but like the poem, and some tattoos too!
  
  Greta xx
  killea: Thanks Greta
  xxx
  j
• yellow
  Ik vind dit heeeeeel mooi, geslaagde vormgeving,
  origineel taalgebruik, poëtisch neergezet met een mooie song als toetje,
  M.
  x
  
  killea: Thank you my sweet Marc
  xxx
  love
  june