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It's Time to Leave

door killea

It's time to leave let's pack our bags and travel the world again
time is wasted on separation and wondering what if when,
we'll live each day in a new place, according to our whim
and leave the past behind for peaceful days in the sun
we'll live in houses big or medium, or no matter how small
and suck the life out of the freedom call, escape the bloody rat race
if we never return to the shackles of our former lives
who cares we'll have a ball, no souvenirs to carry home
new memories created each day, the past is history
never to return, pack your bags let's not delay
we'll ride the horses on the beach at sunset or at dawn
and no longer live according to the relentless rules of life
in cities, so ordered and cruel always dependent on fuel
it's time to leave let's pack our bags forever to be gone.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    Ik wil mee!
    Killea, is een fiets ook goed? Ik kan niet paardrijden!
    XXXXX
    killea: Thanks sweetheart Alles kan niets moet!
    xxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    I can say it in a million words, but I can also say it one: GREAT!
    killea: Thank you so much, darling
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    we have no time to waist June!

    xxx
    jw
    killea: You are so adventurous, Jan - well get packing babe
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Is er voor mij ook nog een plaatsje ?
    Prachtig geschreven.
    killea: Everyone can come along- as long as there is not too much luggage! Thanks Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    mooi killea,
    na een tweede keer te lezen, mooi in woorden maar ik zou het wel in strofes verdelen,
    M.
    x
    killea: Ik niet, thanks for FB sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    This is massive, as in massively nice:-)
    greets
    killea: Thank you so much drebddronefish
    xxx
    j
  • anne
    I can feel your wind of freedom and love, very nice killea, I enjoy that way of living!!
    killea: thanks you Anne
    xxx
    j
  • aquaangel
    super
    killea: Thank you Angelface
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Great poem!

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta,
    xxx
    j
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