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Pure Art

door killea

You come into the darkened room of the hotel
and see the shape of a woman you know so well
smell her perfume, and hear her breath
say nothing but just undress

lay down behind her and whisper in her ear
how I have waited for this moment, I am now here
your hand on her hip you turn her around
her excited breathing the only sound

you kiss her lips, she opens her mouth so full of sin
and the slow dances with your tongues begin
she whispers bonsoir amant, I've waited so long
feel her heartbeat so urgent so strong

then your hands search and find the places
shamelessly open to your embraces
your kisses and tongue do the rest
everything for her is the best

and as you enter her private zones
all you can hear is how she moans
you cannot see you can only feel
how her hips move with your zeal

the passion continues throughout the night
your hands doing all the talking no sight
she shudders and sounds of ecstasy fill the air
and again you gently stroke her hair

wrapped in each other's arms for one night
never to be forgotten, such pure delight
just before dawn after a short sleep
strangers making love, penetration so deep

a kiss goodbye and then you depart
it wasn't just lust but pure Art

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    een zeer mooi verhalend gedicht killea
    met een slotzin die net als de titel zeer poŽtisch is,
    mooi!
    M.
    x
    killea: thenk you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    mooi gedicht met uitstekende slotzin
    killea: thank you, Jakobro
    xxx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Pure art, like you're saying
    greets
    killea: Thank you, dddfish
    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Only one word: Excellent!
    killea: Thank you, Noel
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    L'art pour l'art...
    Beautiful.

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Prachtig
    killea: Thanks, Tessy

    xx
    j
  • jan
    all the above!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you so much Jan
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    When I imagined the Art, I feld the passion it was made with....

    very strong June, really intens!

    xxx
    killea: Thank you so much, Jamal
    xxx
    j
  • b_engel
    meeslepend
    en de slotzin maakt het perfect
    killea: thank you, b engel
    xxx
    j
  • Kerry
    Word er heel warm van
    prachtig gedicht Killea
    groetjes K
    killea: Thank you so much, Kerry
    xxx
    j
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