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Amante

door killea

You call me amante in the language of love
words spoken and written leave me breathless
filling the pauses with the excitement of the new
familiar feelings of the racing heart, the delicious stress
looking at you as you look at me I have to close my eyes
as the impulses activated inflame the primal core
your touch so tender and sublime in the bed of roses
a thorn pricks, pleasure and pain, gasping for more
and as the night ends and we must part for a while
I whisper in your ear, je suis très content
you smile and say you'll be back very soon
whilst I savour your beguiling kiss, mon amant

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • lief
    a lovely poem June!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you, Liefie love
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Lovely indeed!
    Reconnez Chérie
    Quand nous avons vive en ecstasy...

    Greta xx



    killea: Merci beaucoup, Chérie

    xxx
    j
  • jan
    without any doubt one of your best poems I read until now!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Many thanks, Jan darling
    xxxx
    j
  • anne
    Very lovely poem killea, I think you are in love, really;
    killea: Thank you, Anne - no comment!
    xxxx
    j
  • yellow
    xxx
    killea: Thank you, Marc
    xxx
    j
  • b_engel
    you are in love...
    nice
    killea: Thank you b engel
    xxx
    j
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