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for killea
Why do people hurt others
And why do children display bad
What makes a man so bad heart
And how can anyone be so mean
Why can someone back to start
After the incomprehensible way
Another life destroyed
Perverse, mean, wicked, sick
I understand why the world does not
Why can I not do anything
And why would I like to punish
with my hands
I clean my hands in innocence,
Stupid, cowardly, afraid and I'm looking for a
Way in innocence and flight path
From myself, but I still always find ...
Back to the good in people
(sorry for language-mistakes, did my best)
feedback van andere lezers- GoNo2
Pontius Pilatus zou het niet beter kunnen zeggen.... yellow: :) - killea
Thank you so much Marc, you move me beyond words. I am honoured that you would write for me, forget about the mistakes.
love
xxx
June yellow: you're always welcome :) - JakobRo
as always a very nice poem marc yellow: dank u zeer jakobro,
Marc - jack
Who cares about language errors when your intentions are good? Nice, Marc. yellow: thank you jack,
Marc - Hazen
Liefffffff dit! yellow: dank u hazen, groetjes,
Marc - Mistaker
So sweet!
Groet,
Greta yellow: I'm just a sweet guy(not gay)lol
thanks Greta,
Marc - aquaangel
meer dan je best kan je nooit doen
mooi yellow: dank aqua,
Marc
x - Kerry
De eerste zin op zijn eigen is al een mededeling
heel mooi
groetjes K yellow: bedankt Kerry,
groetjes,
Marc - b_engel
zeer aangrijpend Marc
krijg er de tranen van in mijn ogen yellow: meen je dat?
in een opwelling geschreven Dominique,
het was een antwoord op iets van haar dat me enorm raakte,
groetjes,
Marc - matahari
Mea culpa mea maxima culpa...stilmakend!
liefs matahari yellow: thanks for your fb,
Marc
x - KapiteinSeBBos
great poem!
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