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Let Me Disturb You

door killea

Let me disturb you for a while, take your peace of mind
I will show you your shadow dancing beside you
mocking the incomprehensible, the route will be unsigned
take my cold hand and let me drain your heat
show you a chasm so deep, you feel the pull down
make you shiver with trepidation, feed fear to your heart's beat

if you dare, come along on this journey, to another side
hear the dead silence of nothingness, in a crowded room
the scream of terror, in an empty space, with nowhere to hide
buy a ticket to ride cum-dividend, and slide into the bloodied gloom
see the dead blackbird in the middle of the road
its wings splayed, head crushed, and feathers strewn

as the spectre of the past presents you with a vision of what's to come
watch the corpse face up, although it lies seemingly still
smell the stench, adjust your eyes, millions of creatures move it as one
it lifts its index finger to point at you, the flesh falls off the hand
hear the strange music in this moonlit expanse, I ask you to dance
let me help you lose your mind, tapping your feet to the skeleton band


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feedback van andere lezers

  • klaver4
    alocated to the dark side of the moon? :o)
    reaping the dark harvest...
    seems like everybody is merging into one spirit last days!!
    xx
    Dicky
    killea: Thank you so much Dicky,
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    absoluut groots June

    die laatste zin zegt het allemaal hé? 'Let me help you lose your mind, tapping your feet to the skeleton band'

    echt meesterlijk
    killea: thank you so much, sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Don't shoot the pianist.....
    killea: I won't shoot you, Noel
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    zeer mooi killea,
    wel een raar liedje, precies new-wave,
    Marc
    x
    killea: thank you Marc
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Wonderful poem! (and interesting song)

    Greta xx
    killea: Thanks Greta
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Heel mooi.
    killea: Thank you, tessy
    xx
    j
  • b_engel
    Let me disturb you for a while, take your peace of mind
    I will show you your shadow dancing beside you
    Deze vind ik subliem

    ik heb niet alles volledig begrepen maar toch zeer mooi gevonden!

    xxx
    killea: thank you so much for great FB, b engel
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    wunderfull and absolutely interesting poem.
    and please, disturb me

    xx
    killea: will do, jakobro, thank you
    xxx
    j
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