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Final Relief

door killea

No more listening to music enveloping her
bitter sweet the memories she will take down
no more tears to be cried, she remains dry-eyed
gentle, her face no longer a frown
one more drink for the road with a good friend
she gets her outstanding affairs in order
no more ache no more sorrow, it will all end
a high price to pay for liberation, one may think
depth of internal loneliness cannot be reached
there is no answer to what she needs
no person, no drug to heal or be beseeched
her God gave with one hand and took with the other
all she had loved ended in the gutter
she peacefully reflects on her resolution
finding no further words to utter
she buys the gun
the deed is done

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    dark poem,
    don't buy the gun please,
    it only can get better now,
    love,
    M.
    x
    killea: no, no I wouldn't buy a gun! thanks Marc
    xxx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Indeed dark, it reads like a scenario of a road movie. Super!
    greets
    killea: thank you for great FB, dddfish
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    nice and dark picture
    killea: thank you jakobro
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Reminds me of a TV film I once saw: Women who love too much.
    Beautiful dark poem June!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
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