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Disconnected Thoughts

door killea

Feel cold this morning in the dell
still missing him like hell
nice the church bell
wish the dog wouldn't chase ducks
wonder who he now fucks
what do I care
have another affair
must visit the Phoebus Gallery
when is my appointment regarding salary
contact the bookstore about my order
set a date to cross the border
will call mother later today
piles of bills to pay
sea looks gray
tears rolling down my cheek
feel like a freak
wish he would call
just to hear his voice that's all
bloody dog fighting another mutt
have to get out of this rut
need a new car soon
will start everything at noon
purplish-blue flower growing near the sea
just like the one he once gave me
come here Bonnie I want to go back
get my disconnected thoughts on track
sit and write
some more of my shite
life is so full of contrite


©Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Ik mis je ook.....
    killea: En.......
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    ik heb zitten grinniken bij deze!

    xxxx
    killea: that is good, Magdalena
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    well, you are a busy person, sometimes it can be too much,
    emotional poem,
    M.
    xx
    killea: that's what poetry is all about love
    xxx
    j
  • miepe
    geslaagd
    aangeslagen
    killea: Thank you so much Miepe
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi
    killea: Thank you so much Tessy
    xxxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    nice one this that made me smile a bit
    killea: Thank you so much Jakob
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    superwriting!

    xx
    j
    killea: Thank you so much Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Sad but also funny in a way...

    Greta xx
    killea: Yes it is Greta
    xxx
    j
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