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Ode to You

door killea

Shattered dreams
fill my life's song
you understand
keep me strong
protect me with your love
so pure and non-judgemental
I give thanks to the universe above
for your sweetness is elemental
as my spirit falls apart
you reach across the border
you take my hand and fill my heart
give perspective to all the disorder
in your eyes the recognition
the window to your soul
your words and composition
honour me, make me whole




©Killea

feedback van andere lezers

• GoNo2
  Love it !
  killea: Thank you Noel,
  xxx
  j
• b_engel
  prachtig
  wie dit krijgt zal er heel blij mee zijn!
  lekker warmpjes houden en koesteren!
  liefs
  XXX
  killea: Thank you so much b engel
  xxx
  j
• alie_jankind
  je zet hier een mooi gedicht neer!
  
  bij hardop lezen
  het het moelijk de lange woorden in het ritme
  te lezen no- judgementeal , elemental
  ik ben wat met je tekst gaan spelen ...
  
  Shattered dreams
  fill my life's song
  you understand
  and keep me strong
  
  protect me with your love
  so pure and open minded
  then I thank the universe above
  for your winding sweetness
  
  as my spirit falls apart
  you reach over the border
  take my hand and fill my heart
  with perspective to all disorder
  
  in your eyes is recognition
  the window of your soul
  your words and composition
  honour me, make me whole
  
  
  zie maar of je er wat mee kunt/wilt
  
  groeten
  
  killea: Thank you Alie for your FB. I appreciate that you went to the trouble of rewriting my poem, and comprehend your comments, but I stand by my poetry, for better or worse. Many thanks for your efforts.
  xx
  j
• yellow
  some friendship is more then just friendship and it's amazing when you could have someone like you said above,
  i'm sure the person who you write this for is verry happy with your ode,
  Marc
  xxx
  
  wish you a nice spring-sun-sunday
  killea: Thank you Marc!
  xxx
  j
• Mistaker
  Beautiful.
  
  Greta xx
  killea: Thank you Greta
  
  xx
  j
• drebddronefish
  Splendid ode, a joy to read
  greets
  killea: many thanks, dddfish
  xx
  j
• miepe
  yes beautiful, maar af en toe vind ik het wat in of naar een modelzin klinken.
  
  fill my heart-bijvoorbeeld
  
  maar het blijft wel mooi
  killea: Thank you Miepe, af en toe ik ook
  xxx
  j
• jan
  sad and deep as you...(Dave Mason)
  
  xx
  j
  killea: yes, Jan, thank you.
  xxx
  j
• tessy
  Heel mooi
  killea: Thank you Tessy
  xx
  j
• anne
  Lovely!!
  killea: Thank you Anne
  xxx
  j
• secret
  Zo mooi
  Koester het
  
  killea: Thank you Secret
  xx
  j
• Ivan
  Love, Ivan grid
  killea: thank you, Ivan
  xx
  j