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Betere leesbaarheid

Crossroads

door killea

Some people are always right
even when they are wrong
no longer need to be terrified
for every scenario a song

walking in the cold Spring morning
weeping willows hush my cries
legs shaking with angst
wind doesn't care, just sighs

standing beside the grave so fresh
the wilted flowers I behold
they too once stood tall like me
so radiant, brave and bold

the righteousness of some lies buried
already before they die
judgment falls like a rock to crush
then again, who am I

fools who believe to know it all
the madness of the sane
lost at the crossroads for the last time
any route will do, care slain

power be to those so strong
who close their valves, stop the flow
red the colour of love, passion and blood
black and emerald the colours of woe

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Knap !
    killea: thank you, Noel
    xx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    Superb!
    killea: Thank you, Bert
    xx
    j
  • fairy
    'weeping willows hush my cries': splendid sentence!!!

    A very strong poem, June!

    Wendy x
    killea: many thanks, fairy
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    You did it again june! Angst sounds so profound and not of this Earth in English. I like it.
    greets
    killea: thank you, dddfish
    xx
    j
  • jan
    superb!

    xx
    j
    killea: many thanks, Jan
    xx
    j
  • Yellow
    very beautiful J.
    x
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Weer een pareltje June.
    killea: many thanks, tessy
    xx
    j
  • anne
    It sounds like a song, so right and nice, very nice!!
    killea: many thanks, Anne
    xx
    j
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