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Beacon

door killea

Never thought I would dream
about someone like you
wrapped in a web of sensation
where to go, what to do
mind participates in reverie
constant, unrelenting desire
wind takes my words to you
lead to the storm's beacon fire

my symbol of hope in the mist
in uncertainties of time
strange beloved, do you feel it too
stranded in the rebound climb
never thought I could love
someone like you
flashing insight perfect
time is now, and I do

feedback van andere lezers

• b_engel
  waauw!
  herkenbaar en mooi neergezet!
  liefs
  killea: thank you, b engel
  xx
  j
• yellow
  what a strong love-poem,
  love it,
  Marc
  x
  killea: Thank you darling
  xx
  j
• miepe
  yes I feel it too
  but is it me you're looking fooooor
  and I wonder who you are
  etc
  (een liedje hoor, dat me binnen schiet)
  killea: good for you, Miepe
  thanks
  xx
  j
• ppe
  'wrapped in a web of sensation' I loved this one as most of is and remains sensations which take different colors (if I may refer to the poem of Gono2)
  killea: Thank you ppe
  xx
  j
• alie_jankind
  een vers van hoop,
  in een warme omslag van liefde
  mooi hoor
  
  groeten
  killea: Thank you Alie
  xx
  j
• jan
  I hope you find a safe harbour!
  
  xx
  j
  killea: Thank you so much, Jan
  xx
  j
• tessy
  Ik ga mee met vorige comment , heel mooi
  killea: Thank you so much, Tessy
  xx
  j