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Tangible Language
Meaningful words burst into my reason
touch the nervous system, short circuit turn
feed the senses with ruthless desires
ignited, inextinguishable, slow burn
sanity a far cry from reality
uncompromising pull of his verse
imperceptibly want becomes need
racing blood, a blessing or a curse
thirst for tangible language
nocturnal cravings no food can sate
everything but his verbal skill, his touch
everything else can wait……
feedback van andere lezers- ivo
of hoe de intelligentie de liefde bedrijft met virtuele begrippen die geproduceerd zijn door het woord
killea: Ivo, why do I even bother writing lines and lines, when you say it all in one.
have to give you an uitstekend for your FB
xx
j - miepe
ivoots fb maakt het me nog moeilijker
wacht ga het nog eens herlezen
ik lees je in een groot vraagteken. the never ending question of to do or not to do...
gggg
bye swietie
killea: Have trouble with the question to be or not to be, let alone to do or not to do, darling
xx
j - JakobRo
i follow Ivo in his feedback.
Very nice poem June!
killea: Thank you Jacob. With the Master feed backing me, all my poetry is laid bare, short and sweet!
xx
j - jamal
touched by your feeling...xxx
killea: Thank you, sweetheart
xx
j - drebddronefish
That's what it is all about, more is better for some:-)
killea: Indeed, dddfish
xx
j - yellow
wauw! come with me too, you can take Maurice with you when you come to visite me, be carefull, i say this just time ;)
but I'm serious, when I'm feeling better and everything is done, come to visite me :)
M.
xxx
killea: Yes Marc, I cannot wait!
xx
j
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