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Incessant Hunger
No doubt at all you feel so strong
how you make me feel, plays the song
eyes that mirror every move I make
all perils of the game, a risk to take
separation leaves me fully distraught
no need to speak, we feel each thought
you come to me, an ethereal flight
invade my dreams in the endless night
incessant hunger a lover's plight
feedback van andere lezers- Ivan
Isnd't that lovely ???
oh, oh, oh, Kilea becarefull love
regards Ivan
killea: Thank you, Ivan
xx
j - ivo
of hoe het mooie overweldigd?
killea: Indeed, Ivo
xx
j - elpe
om veriefd op te worden.
killea: Thank you Elpe
xx
j - tessy
Herkenbaar June, knap geschreven.
killea: Thank you, Tessy
xx
j - Zingendevleugel
om verliefd te blijven prachtig!xxx
killea: thank you Diana
xx
j - drebddronefish
It's your eulogy to the ethereal game between the eternal grass and the wind that set fire on the beginning of time. Impressive as always june
greets
killea: Many thanks, dddfish
xx
j - ppe
love the title
killea: many thanks, ppe
xx
j - martine
prachtig schrijven
killea: many thanks, martine
xx
j - jan
superbeautiful June!
xxx
j
killea: many thanks, Jan
xx
j - jamal
I feel what you're feeling and that makes two of us...sorry four
you are for sure a strong feeling-writer, if this is correct English
the writing comes from the hart, not from the pen
xxx
killea: indeed it does, Jamal
xx
j - anne
Ik ben jaloers op je engelse taalvaardigheid killea, lovely!
killea: en ik op je Nederlands, lief
xx
j
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