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Usurper
Living on the edge
a place known so well
distances short
between heaven and hell
at best, do your worst
open challenge to fate
for reparation in style
it is far too late
no point in learning
the rules of the game
will not play the part
when they change again
sailing on placid seas
for a while allowed to feel
contentment and grace
undercurrents ripping at the keel
don't dare to show your face, thief
I've dealt with you before
your darkness I will fight with light
do not knock on my door
feedback van andere lezers- ivo
de waarheid wint altijd ook al is soms 'te' laat, maar in eeuwigheid bestaat er geen 'te laat' ... en waarheid en licht zijn wat mij betreft synoniem ..
een zeer mooi gedicht
killea: thank you Ivo
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j - Magdalena
schitterend!
en de commentaar van ivo ook
dit is iets om te laten doordringen +++
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killea: thank you darling
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j - martine
sterk emotioneel dicht
prachtig schrijven
prettig weekend
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killea: thank you so much martine
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j - jan
strong words from the edge of your beautiful mind!
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j
killea: many, many thanks love
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j - tessy
Zo mooi... graag gelezen
killea: thank you Tessy
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j - yellow
that's the spirit, don't let the bad feelings catch you, wave them away,
M.
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killea: Many thanks Marc
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j - Liesje
sterk... zeker de laatste strofe
killea: many thanks Liesje
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j
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