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Getaway
Taping shut the cartons
of memories good and bad
relief floods the circuit
closing chapter written
three lines on a note pad
true nature of your demons
exposed by fear
your chains
have a missing link
your forfeit so dear
sly and deceitful
final undertaking
you smile at your tricks
to devastate, ever hopeful
of my breaking
you crossed the line
disgraceful conduct
mind closed, reality abated
with empty-handed bliss
I leave you to self-destruct
feedback van andere lezers- Zingendevleugel
het loopt goed
ik versta niet perfect
ik lees mooie bloemen
liefs xx
killea: Thank you, Diana
xx
j - ppe
sterke afsluiter
killea: many thanks, ppe
xx
j - jan
sounds bad,
xxx
j
killea: Yes Jan, my divorce has taken a really nasty turn!
xx
j - anne
;-)
killea: thank you Anne
xx
j - jamal
met jouw reactie op Jan heb ik je schrijven beter kunnen
begrijpen en dan voelen je woorden nog beter aan.
veel sterkte June!
killea: thank you Jamal, this time too shall pass
xxx
j - Liesje
Ik volg Jamal... door jouw feedback grijpt het gedicht echt aan!
killea: thank you Liesje
xx
j - ivo
mensen zijn mensen in al hun eigenschappen ... en ja soms loopt het anders dan gedroomd .. en ja soms doet herinneren pijn en soms voelt men zich schuldig waarvoor men niet schuldig is ..
sterkte ...
killea: thank you Ivo, I have nothing to feel guilty about but just extremely disappointed, having trusted and been fooled into believing we could be
civil and fair.......'life' happens when one least expects it.
xx
j - Klaver4
pfff, let him wallow in his self pitty; if he can't be grand, so much farther are his stars to reach, which in the end he'll realize, and he will then have to pay with the solitude that always comes to keep such people company...
xx
dicky
killea: many thanks Dicky
xx
j - yellow
I think I know what it is about,
strong feelings,
hope the war finally end in peace for your both souls
in a kind of friendship but I guess that isn't possible anymore,
love,
M.
killea: no, that has been taken off the table
xx
j
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