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No sound of you

door killea

your parting kiss still lingers
a faint trace of your after shave
there is no sound of you
house is silent as the grave
our furniture well co-ordinated
seems to be all out of place
my perfect mirror is shattered
don't recognise the face
you have to do what you must
the call was made and you obeyed
and I, in goodness and mercy trust
you will return the same
I lie in the empty bed
calling out your name
press your pillow to my face
there is no sound of you
it is so still in this old house
whisper another prayer-filled adieu
as emptiness pervades
show tears and fear defiance
so still, so quiet
you're gone
silence

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • alie_jankind
    heel gevoelig gedicht, prachtig verwoord

    groeten
    killea: many thanks, Alie
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    droevig hard en mooi
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    moving poem, I hope it's for a short time and I'm sure love is not gone x
    killea: You're right it is not gone, only M is gone for a few weeks thanks to DSF korps. Thanks for lovely FB
    xx
    j
  • LilyMayParker
    so fragile and bittersweet...
    very moving sweet Killea
    love
    Nathalie
    xxxx
    killea: thank you, sweetheart
    xxxx
    j
  • jan
    like a shattered dream
    xxx
    j
    killea: the dream lives on despite a leave of absence....
    xxx
    j
  • Liesje
    droevig, maar zo zacht neergepend, dat er een rust van jouw gedicht straalt...
    killea: Thank you so much sweet Liesje
    xx
    j
  • lazey
    very good picture you painted here, and so real!
    killea: many thanks Lucky
    xx
    j
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