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Living the dream

door killea

It started with a dream
a vision imperceptibly shared
a love so full of passion
some discrepancies bared
difficult has been the path
to find the life of our dreams
so much distraction, interference
by virtual strangers as it seems
each day a waking venture
everything I see with you
seems so grand, exciting
the known is suddenly new
your words, songs to recall
feel an instant spark
your touch electrifying
eyes burning, dark
kisses so ardent, time lost
forgetting all duty calls
listening as we murmur
the centuries old walls

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • bragt
    met trillend ritme geschreven
    killea: many thanks, Roel
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Be happy in love and live the time of your life in that new city.

    (get well soon)

    XX
    M
    killea: Thank you for FB and well wishes, see you Mon
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    Heel graag gelezen.

    Vind de twee laatste verzen bijzonder mooi.
    killea: thank you, Christine
  • drebddronefish
    Nice june, like a hotchocolate-The mamas crossover, something
    greets
    killea: many thanks, manuel
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Dreams to remember...

    Greta x
    killea: thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    mooi gedicht zet je hier neer

    misschien ivm het ritme:
    finding life of our dreams

    groeten
    killea: many thanks, Alie
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Graag gelezen hoor,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
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