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I keep falling…

door killea

Brick walls, rooms tiled in sorrow
each a different hue of blue
memories paved with history
so many bridges burned with adieu
gave you the easy choice to go
waited for you in the café
you came resolute with tear-filled eyes
in your arms a red rose bouquet
when I fall apart you make love to me
an erotic, emotional ascent
when you go, as you must
I plunge into abysmal lament
you break down my walls
melt away my lingering pain
and I keep falling in love with you
over and over again

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sB8G_e4GHqg

feedback van andere lezers

• jan
  coming down like this don't hurt much,
  
  lovely poem June!
  
  grtzz
  killea: Thank you Jan
  xxx
  j
• JakobRo
  lovely June
  killea: thank you Jakob
  xx
  j
• fairy
  Nice one, it seems as someone is standing there to catch you when you fall ;-)
  
  Wendy x
  killea: thank you Wendy, sorry for the name confusion! Will never call you 'anything'...
  xx
  j
• manono
  I particularly like : 'so many bridges burned with adieu'
  killea: many thanks Christine
  xx
  j
• LilyMayParker
  very strong writing dear June
  love
  Nathalie
  xxx
  killea: thank you sweetness
  xx
  j
• tessy
  stilmakend
  killea: many thanks Tessy
  xx
  j
• hettie35
  Sterk neer gezet,
  groetjes Hettie
  killea: thank you Hettie
  xx
  j