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Betere leesbaarheid

Hush, hush

door killea

Running ahead of the wind
cold, cold its breath on my heels
carrying the sacrifices made
wrong turns, lost ideals

exhaustion in my being
stopped for a gulp of air
the storm caught up
overtook, wind didn't care

cringing I cried with fear
it blew around me with ease
running futile, heard a hush, hush
it was only a breeze

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • tessy
    prachtig
    killea: Many thanks Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    the storm's always in a hurry June,

    xxx
    j


    killea: don't we know it Jan
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    It's almost a story. I like it very much.
    killea: many thanks Christine
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    Love it!
    killea: Thank you Jakob
    xx
    j
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