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Lemons

door killea

Exiled to the island of my space
a constant ebb and flow of emotion
waves of disillusion lapping the boundary
so much silence amidst the commotion
lemons of life squashed to liquid
a drink so sour, a taste so bitter
often camouflaged to endure
but it's only an artificial sweetener

returned you look and feel the same
it hurts to see you struggle and suffer
a real man must do, what a man must do
and you did, though they left you no buffer
as you lie in my arms each night
barely suppressing inner tears
merged in an ocean of love
I conceal my constant fears…

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    ****slik****
    killea: thank you karine
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Schitterend!
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Ik ben er stil van...
    killea: thanks you so much Tessy
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Dit is diepgaand en mooi verwoord

    Willy
    killea: many thanks Willy
    xx
    j
  • Manono
    Beautiful phrases of sorrow.
    killea: thank you Christine
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I read it in dutch, this is farout, the best you ever wrote I think!!!

    XXX
    J
    killea: well thank you Jan, I appreciate your generous FB
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    superb!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: many thanks Lief
    xxx
    j
  • VUURKRACHT
    woorden vol pijn en emotie...
    goede moed.
    Monique
    killea: many thanks Monique
    xxx
    j
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