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Surges
feverish hunger
wrapped in a beguiling smile
detracts from battle
scenes played teasing wits
languishing aura of green
scarlet sunset sea
footprints follow coast
seagulls circle endlessly
words sink in wet clinch
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Beautiful, Killea!
killea: Thank you christine
xx
j - jan
everyday the waves are different, that's the sea...
xxx
j
killea: and every day she sings a different song
xxx
j - hettie35
Beautiful Killea
groetjes Hettie killea: many thanks Hettie
xx
j - Hoeselaar
Jouw voetsporen op een strand terwijl je woorden in een clich liggen met de daarboven vliegende meeuwen, je moet er maar op komen hé!
Willy killea: Yes, Willy, I am a bit weird.....
thank you
xx
j - tessy
graag gelezen killea: many thanks Tessy
xx
j - kerima_ellouise
erg mooi Killea !
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groetekes killea: many thanks Kerima Ellouise
xx
j - marrik
Thank (your) God that the footprints will disappear.
I don't want anyone to follow in my steps.
HAHAHAHAHA
M killea: with your long legs it would be practically impossible.
thanks mate
xx
j - martine
prachtige poëzie killea
liefs
xxx killea: thank yu so much martine
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j - klaver4
had a nice evening stroll along the seashore perhaps :o)??
xx
Dicky killea: something like that....
xxx
j
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