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Paradise (kanshi)

door killea

white giants fly overhead
reflected blue lapping sand
freedom felt not understood
paradise is a long strand
wonders open calloused eyes
wounds of regret slowly heal
table decked in shades of red
palpable, to see, to feel

feedback van andere lezers

• hettie35
  Schitterend Killea
  
  groetjes Hettie
  killea: Thank you so much Hettie
  xx
  j
• klaver4
  Paradise Lost was a café I often visited in Bruges in my - then much - younger days!
  Haven't got a clue what a kanshi is actually but hey, form is not my dada hey..;o)
  xxx
  dicky
  killea: Ah, Bruges one of my favourite places! As for form, well you have your own unique form...
  xxx
  j
• jan
  if paradise is half as nice as this poem, I think I understand what mau means;-)
  
  grtzz
  killea: thank you Jan. Will wait in anticipation of your spicey - oops sorry meant to say spacey details of your long lost cousins.
  xxx
  j
• yellow
  great shape of images xx
  killea: thank you Marc
  xxx
  j
• Hoeselaar
  Naar de oertijd terug gagaan en met dino's spelende beelden, ach wat is tijd en wat is gevoel
  
  Willy
  killea: time seldom changes feelings, yet feelings often changes times
  thanks for your constant lovely FBs
  xxx
  j
• tessy
  Dank voor de uitvoerige beschrijving van dit soort poezie June, het is prachtig
  killea: It is my pleasure Tessy, thank you
  xx
  j
• martine
  het lichtend landschap van de overkant
  prachtig killea
  killea: Thank you Martine
  xx
  j
• manono
  One would wish to be there.
  Beautiful, Killea!
  killea: Many thanks Christine
  xx
  j