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Honeysuckle (Tanka)

door killea

Honeysuckle

white blossom perfumed
open inviting ovule
tantalizing be

royal short intimacy
jelly for the virgin queen

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • manono
    It's always fascinating to see a bee or a bumblebee enter a flower.
    Very erotic too, though bumblebees can be very clumpsy. They also make a lot of noise.
    killea: Thank you Christine
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Zo beautiful Killea

    groetjes Hettie
    killea: Many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Prachtig June
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • jan
    this is pure flower power love;-))

    xxx
    j
    killea: indeed it is Jan :):) back at you
    xxx
    j
  • klaver4
    Albeit that I'm not that into Tanka's, Haiku's and whatever Japanese name and formats and forms poems are limited and foreced into (I know they seem to have earned their right of existence, even if they have Japanese names...), I read a message in a poem when there is one, and here there is one...
    The second part of the poem has a cutting edge, precise, passionate (in all it's meanings) and reflecting!
    Nice June!!!
    xxx
    Dicky
    killea: you got it darling Dicky
    xxx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Ik volg klaver 4

    Willy
    killea: thank you Willy
    xx
    j
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