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Funny Farm

door killea

cock crows before dawn
hens frenzied cackle to pens
eggs laid rhythm born

sushi breakfast in the barn
scraps thrown to poisen penned pig

 

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  • marrik
    Just looking at the chick's in mi garden and i see what you mean.
    Ze zijn allemaal hartstikke gek. (die beesten)

    KFC rules


    HAHA

    M
    killea: Let's fry 'em all! KFC aint what it used to be! BBQ'd chicks in the graveyard..........
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    can you believe my cat (named Pussy) like's French fries...

    xxx
    j
    killea: Jan, you're supposed to give FB on my poem not FB on the FB
    from others, you chickenshit (just kidding love)
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Funny J. :-)
    killea: Thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • lief
    superfunny!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you so much Lief
    xx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    I will call my hen Sushi from now on :-)

    liefs
    killea: So, one day you will have 'roasted' sushi?
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Weer heel mooi Killea,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: Thank you Hettie
    xx
    j
  • manono
    I had some trouble to understand because pigs do eat raw eggs. They'll eat anything.
    I understand there must be another meaning.

    killea: indeed it has Christine
    xx
    j
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