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Lowlands express

door killea



words
no longer
spoken in anger
with strength in clarity
softly in verity articulated
accusatory moderated
dignity and decorum
often underrated
tone the music
and power
heard

trip on lowlands express

speaking
to the foreign
decibels increased
row with neighbours
all intellect ceased
insults disbursed
diseases cursed
no knowledge
unearthed in
shouting
deaf

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    you have a way with words June..

    xxx
    j
    killea: so do you love!
    xxx
    j
  • hettie35
    Dit heeft het onbehouwen en ongemanierde volk
    wel verdiend, een mooie spotparodie!

    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Yes!

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Knap zoals altijd van jou hand J
    killea: thank you so much Tessy
    xx
    j
  • manono
    I live in your well described Lowland Express territory.
    The decision is made a few weeks ago. I'm going to move.

    'Foreign decibels' ... don't tell me about it.
    killea: good for you Christine
    xx
    j
  • klaver4
    as said before, it takes two to tango. One can one's utmost, to keep centered, and keep the communication line open, but in the face of ears born deaf and a mouth grown to compensate that misfortune, one has little options than either retreat, or go frontal (whilst knowing that retreat only gives them more conviction to persue that same strategy the next time, the tease is often too great for us mortals...).
    I hear you!
    xxx
    dicky
    killea: I know you do, Dicky. When people start shouting, as they often do in Holland, I automatically shut down and only hear the noise and have no idea what it is about anymore, and quite frankly find it beneath my dignity to pursue the details.
    xxx
    j
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