He says he's just a teaser
a joker and a pleaser
this time it wasn't too smart
a joke too far, too tart
she is angry, she doesn't buy it
on a level so deep, so quiet
to smoulder, grow as she smiles
visually packing, eating the miles
joker not laughing now
goodbye frown on brow
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he laughed too long and too hard, it seems !
nice poem Killea !
killea: thank you Silvia
Heel erg mooi Killea,
killea: thank you Hettie
i'd like to teasy sometimes ;-))
killea: you are a big tease, jan
killea: thank you Tessy
hope this an old poem beacuse it has a feirce bite! A joke that's not appreciated says quite a lot about disconnection between the teller and the audience (read: who the joke was on), and the aftermath even more!
killea: No Dicky, it is a new poem.......if I ever do bite, it won't be a nibble
It's part of the game, I guess.
killea: thank you Christine
bijzonder mooi terug killea
killea: many thanks Martine
moest meteen aan Steve Miller denken
killea: many thanks Lucky